Thursday, December 16, 2010

J.J's Fanfic for the day!!!

Back by popular demand a second installment of J.J's fanfic....

Long ago, she had gotten mad at him because he never showed he cared. He was like any other guy, sort of hapless unless told what to do. Sure, he was able to be romantic, and no, he wasn’t completely dense, but it takes him time. Sadly, she was a bit impatient.
So on her birthday he decided that he was going to treat her to a spa. He didn’t want to take her to one, he wanted to be the one to give her the massage, and whatever else a spa was. He figured all he had to do was set the Jacuzzi feature on their tub, light some candles, make the bubbles extra foamy and maybe add some flower petals for good measure…and with some luck he’d be able to join.
However, no such luck. When she came home she dropped her bag on the floor, something she does when upset—she was fastidious. The pets ran to her, but she stomped through the living room, completely ignoring him. She slammed the door to their bedroom.
He panicked now, she never slammed doors.
“You, alright?” He knocked from his side. He heard a string of profanities as the shower turned on.
Barging into their bedroom and opened the door to the master bath, she had completely missed the flowers, candles, and bubbles. She was crying in the shower, though.
“Uh, Buin?”
She didn’t respond, but she sunk down hugging her knees as the shower beat on her—fully clothed. Her makeup was runny and her hair a matted mess. But she still looked lovely, and his heart ached. He grabbed a bottle of shampoo and wordlessly lathered, rinsed, and then conditioned her hair. He washed away her makeup and embraced her sopping wet body to his.
They stayed in the shower until the hot water ran out, and a smile was back on her face.

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

warm hearted fanfic..thank you so much J.J...from thai ssangchu

lk said...

Thanks meme!

J.J. said...

Thank you guys for liking it!
I've got two on the way!

Anonymous said...

J.J. A beautiful heart shape of pictures of our love. There is a real meaning to it. Maybe you need to send the picture to HB's twitty acount. To show JBores' love. I like your fiction as well.
We felt our heart down there. Justin.

Anonymous said...

love it..it so heartwarming

J.J. said...

Thank you Justin, however I didn't post up that picture with the story. LOL That's all Meme, she's far more romantic than I am, I think--as proved by my "singleness" (neurosis and other things...LOL kidding. kidding!)

Thank you Anonymous'! :)

Anonymous said...

love the fic j.j... more to come?

purple-chagi

Anonymous said...

love the fic j.j... more to come?

purple-chagi

meme =p said...

IK: You're welcome but J.J. did all the work =p

J.J i think you protest too much =p if you weren't romantic, you wouldn't be able to write the great fanfics that you do!

Purplei-chagi: i think J.J mentioned she had two on the way.

GaGa said...

@J.J.: Thank you for the fanfic.....After reading yours, I think I have to resume to translation mode......

@MeMe: I'm very curious....Is your avastar pic is from your own wedding photo? Or it's a work of PS from LVK of Ssangchu? I love that photo!!
Calm, Romanic and Intimate......

J.J. said...

meme! I got ur email, did u get the one i sent last night? if nt il push it to sh's email. And thanks :p bt really, im not too romantic :p

Yessica said...

Gaga: that picture is part of her wedding photos. If u visit her i-am-meme.blogspot.com blog you can see some of her other wedding pics. They are ultra cute. Her photographer is good and SH said her pictures were joongbo inspired.

Meme: a couple more hours!!!!! Congrats!

fudgeorange said...

Thanks JJ for the nice fanfic! ^^ segyero!

Jobibee said...

awww so heartwarming! i simply love this! i love how it lingers and makes me want to re-read it over and over!